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Payne of the Bite

Pain to the Max

By LUiS Wrote THiS StoryPublished 6 years ago Updated 2 years ago 3 min read
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Credited By: Rockstar Games

Max Payne became a Devil of Hell's Kitchen after losing his wife and baby girl to mobster extortion in 2002. Max was known in Harlem as "a menace with a gun," and the thought of him even surviving that ordeal in Rio de Janeiro back in 2013 was unfathomable at the time.

Floating in a State of Payne

Payne decided that some minor facial recognition and a new expensive life in sunny California would be a welcome change from the grimy streets of New York City. Even though he had amnesia after falling off a college yacht, Max decided that a life-threatening head bump on some Rhinoceros Death Coral wouldn't stop him from thinking—there would be nothing truly wrong with his memory in the future.

The memories and pain that seemed to come with being a retired police officer seemed to wash and fade away over the next few weeks. Following the boat incident, Max Payne's vengeance, along with his ferocious pain pill and alcohol addiction, seemed to have been replaced by a slew of strange artificial reminders. Night after night, memories that were not his own began to flood in.

Price of "The Last Score"

What appeared to be a head bump could have been his divine intervention before Max knew it. The life of a rogue cop and a widowed husband appeared to have been washed away. Yesterday's Max Payne was nearly extinct.

Payne began to remember things that were not his. Max Payne's new persona was inspired by his dreams and nightmares of being Michael, a retired bank robber and grand theft auto felon. This new persona allowed the old Payne to prolong his momentary solitude.

Memories of a Time Long Before

To Max Payne, this Michael was completely unknown. However, the quiet life that either persona desired for themselves began to fade and be forgotten over time. Michael's retired fighter pilot friend Trevor and the vehicle specialist Franklin began devising a well-thought-out plan to assist Michael with what he referred to as his "last score."

The man known as Max Payne was no longer alive after that. A lab assistant and her boss were pacing back and forth in a deep underground lab somewhere in the middle of the great USA.

Nightmaresto Living Science

They were summoned to continue developing the prototype embryo, which would be known as the successor to the Legendary Hitman Agent 47, by the Umbrella Corporation, the original creator of the rabid transferring zombie T Virus. The never-sleeping city.

It's like a living thing, constantly growing upwards and outwards. This city's residents are survivors. The entire planet was on the verge of extinction before people discovered how to build a utopia for their children. In 1494, sorcerers, monsters, and mask ninjas arrived on Earth to battle the world's most deadly fighters.

Illuminated in Moonlight

After being shot through his Brazilian Teflon armor, Max Payne went into a coma and a deep slumber. What happened next is difficult to explain, but Max Payne witnessed his forefathers' pain and suffering in America, as well as how it affected Southern America.

Soon after wandering this land, he came across a wood-fired fire, and a wolf transformed into an Indian looked into his eyes and spoke to him in his native tongue, telling him of a beastly tribe that survived the dinosaurs long ago, causing God to shun them and leave them under the Earth until one day they would rise and try to reclaim what was once theirs.

Copyright © 2018 LUiS Thompson

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About the Creator

LUiS Wrote THiS Story

When he's not designing or laying down brutalities in Mortal Kombat, LUiS Thompson is establishing a foundation the writing communities.

Link: https://6351bedfab123.site123.me/

Email: [email protected]

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